Thanks - will be great to know the other potential argument if possible even if not including now.
I have now also received a response from Paybyphone support, will be good to know if adds to my case/helps? or should i not include it (last pic below)
Updated draft ref belowDear Sirs,
I want to make an informal representation regarding PCN XXXX.
I was attending a post-pregnancy complication-related hospital appointment at 10.30am (hospital appointment letter can be seen in exhibit A) and arrived at the location at 10.15am. The Paybyphone app (which I had used at a previous appointment on 25-May, receipt picture in exhibit B) was not working so I used the Chrome browser application on the phone to go to the paybyphone website and started a session by entering my details and went through all the steps including payment by 10.20 am and the session was showing as having started on the page. I paid for 1.5 hours as my last appointment at the same hospital clinic had taken around 2 hours due to delays and I was anticipating staying for a long time. From my previous visit, I am also aware that this area is enforced strictly by the council, being right next to a hospital and there are many enforcement agents walking about at all times.
I then had to take 2 of my kids (an under 1-year-old and the other a 2-year-old) out of the car and put in the pram and get to the Golden Jubilee Wing of the hospital and enter the 3rd floor which took around 10 minutes and I arrive at the hospital clinic at 10.30. To my shock, on reaching the location when I looked at my mobile again the live parking session had disappeared and the paybyphone website was showing a “Connection Error” message. I immediately restarted the steps and purchased a new session which started at 10.33 am for 1.5 hours (see Exhibit C for receipt for this, no receipt email received for the earlier session from 10.15).
The appointment at the clinic was very efficient this time and I was seen shortly after. I then took my kids and myself back to the car and was dismayed to see a PCN attached to the car.
I had no intention of not paying for the session and the parking session had started on the paybyphone website when I left the car and due to some error with the paybyphone website or system the session was not recorded. I also include a photo of my browser history which shows I had to visit paybyphone app multiple times in the morning of the 26th (see exhibit D).
I left the site at 10.51 am (see Exhibit E, Google timeline showing my time of arrival and departure).
In summary: I started a paid live parking session at around 10.15am and left with the honest belief I had paid. There must have been some technical issues with Paymyphone as their mobile application was not working and I was forced to pay via the browser which showed a live session when I left the car. I immediately paid for a new parking session when on reaching the hospital I realised the live parking session had turned into an "Connection Error" message in the paybyphone website. I then had to try multiple times to make the payment as can be seen. The only reason the parking session disappeared after initially being started by me is a technical issue with paybyphonbe and I have even contacted Paybyphone support who confirmed that I went through all the steps at 10:15 and entered the payment details, location time etc. For some fault with their website the session started on my browser but not on their system (Exhibit F) I urge you to please consider the circumstances above and cancel the PCN. I will of course be more than happy to provide any other information that you request.
Yours faithfully,
Exhibits





