Please see the draft of my initial appeal to the council that was rejected below. Any ideas on what to add/remove for the next challenge?
"I am writing to formally appeal the Penalty Charge Notice (PCN) I received on 22/06/2023 for an alleged parking violation at Atherton Street. I respectfully request that you review the circumstances surrounding this incident, as I firmly believe that the ticket was issued in error.
According to the PCN, I was accused of parking in a suspended parking zone between 19 to 25 Atherton Street. However, I would like to bring to your attention that I was, in fact, parked directly in front of 27 Atherton Street, which was not part of the suspended area. I have attached pictorial evidence that clearly shows my vehicle parked legally in front of the aforementioned address during the time specified on the PCN.
I kindly request that you carefully review the attached evidence, which clearly demonstrates that my vehicle was not parked in a suspended zone. I trust that upon examination, you will acknowledge the error and promptly cancel the penalty charge.
In light of this situation, I kindly ask for your understanding and swift resolution to rectify this matter. I appreciate your attention to this appeal and I kindly request that you respond in writing to confirm the cancellation of the PCN. Should you require any further information or clarification, please do not hesitate to contact me.
Thank you for your prompt attention to this matter."