Thank you! This is what I sent:
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The ‘date of service’ Change
appeal provision in paragraph 1(3)
of Schedule 1 to the London
Local Authorities Act 2003
(LLAA 2003) doesn't apply
to the payment periods
specified by section 4(

(iii)
and (iv) of the LLAA 2003,
as it only applies to the
authorities' discretion to
disregard representations
made after the 28 day
period. The payment period
& appeal period are
conflated. The law says it is
a 2 working day difference.
It is unclear when the 14 or
28 days begin & end.
Regarding the incident itself
I would like to include
explanation. I am usually
extremely conscientious of
these things, e.g. ensuring
my vehicle does not
overhang yellow lines when
parking etc, so it is shocking
to me that I could have
made this error. There is
limited parking in the area
that I live, & though I, on a
daily basis, see other drivers
leave their cars on double
yellow lines, creating
obstructions &/or hazards all
day without ever being
ticketed, I always take the
time to find a legal place to
park.
I understand that the
procedure for yellow boxes
is to check that your exit is
clear before you enter. In the
situation I was in, I could
see the road ahead. A
queue ahead was in place
due to traffic lights further
up, however it was all still
moving but as I approached
the lights turned from green
to red. From where I was, it
seemed that there would be
enough room on the
opposite side of the yellow
box once the traffic had
finished crawling towards
the red light given the
number of cars & the space
available on the reasonably
long stretch of road.
Everything was still moving
as I entered. I believe it is
generally advised to leave
about a metre of space
between cars in queues, &
as can be seen in the
image, the car directly in
front of mine seems to be
leaving a gap of at least 2
metres. With multiple cars
ahead probably leaving
larger than necessary gaps
between vehicles, I ended
up forced to overlap the box.
Stationary vehicles stopped
me from moving any further
forward, & of course,
reversing was not a safe
option.
Also, the road splits into 2
lanes around half way
between the yellow box &
the lights, so if even one
vehicle had gone into the
right hand lane, I would
have had more than ample
space without issue.
There is also a slip of
parking spaces directly
before the lights, & it is
possible that a vehicle was
allowed to slip into the
queue from there as the
traffic slowed down, thereby
taking the space I would
have occupied.
Reviewing the video, which provides 22
seconds of footage before
the stop, we see a silver
vehicle moving at some
speed pass out of view. It is
6 seconds before the next
blue vehicle follows,
seemingly speeding up after
coming out of the junction.
The next vehicle stops in
view of the camera, but
considering the speed of the
previous 2 vehicles, you
would assume there was a
reasonable space ahead of
them, else they should have
been slowing.
The yellow box is too large
for the junction. Other
similar junctions with wide
curved pavements to do not
extend the box any further
than necessary to provide
access to the junction. No
obstruction was caused, &
vehicles were able to easily
use the junction without
issue, as evidenced by one
doing so in the video.
According to TfL, the
purpose of the box is to
keep the junctions clear to
allow free exit & entrance.
As long as traffic can still
flow, and gridlock is
prevented, the box junction
is effective. Despite my
overlap, the junction was not
blocked at all.
So | would like the PCN cancelled for any of the following reasons:
Not correctly delivered. The letter was sent to an outdated address.
Unclear and contradictory
legislation regarding appeal
and payment periods.
Therefore unenforceable.
Vehicles preventing exit by occupying my space.
De minimis contravention. Stopped only for a few
seconds. No obstruction was caused at all.
Visibility of the end yellow box being unclear.
Yellow box being too large.
Incomplete video.
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I also added two photos of yellow boxes that did not extend as far as that one and the TFL definition of what a yellow box is for, to show that I did not prevent its function.